Maybe a little tweaking would work?

EDIT: Sorry, I meant tweening. Maybe a little tweening on the movements might work.
Also, adjust the timing. If things need to move fast, make it fast. If they're slow, make them slow. Everything plays like a slideshow.
Last but not the least, this needs polishing.

I'm not here to lay waste on your animation, because the video is nice. It's just that the quality kinda distracts me. So while the video needs a bit more work, good job, and good luck on your endeavors.