5 stars as far as the song goes, really sweet and soft, but animation is a bit more of a 4. The recycling of scenes does work, sort of, but it's still recycling.
All in all ya got something pretty great here, especially since it was a 1 person job.
//sorry for my voice hahaha//
//sorry for this nonsense song//
when i was only 14 years old, i always had a dream about a guy whose always in pain and suffering... so i made a song for him :/
5 stars as far as the song goes, really sweet and soft, but animation is a bit more of a 4. The recycling of scenes does work, sort of, but it's still recycling.
All in all ya got something pretty great here, especially since it was a 1 person job.
pretty good, both the song and the animation, the animation style is strange but good.
i liked it, good job! (:
Quit apologizing, doll. This is a great flash and you have a pretty singing voice. 4/5 stars from me.
Awh. It strikes a chord and feels strangely relatable. I think you should own what you are- your voice and song both sounded good!
A pretty macabre dream too! And sad. You convey that pretty well, if it was... would've been nice with a happier ending, or at least some kind of meaning, some conclusion, something that goes somewhere where you might be satisfied with how it goes... but I guess it's a dream after all.
Not bad. A little vocal practice and it'd be pretty masterful. ;) The mood comes across either way. Soft and melancholy.
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thanks so much, it's actually my first mv animation and i didn't know how to make good music yet hahaha, and btw im not satisfied with my work too, like how it ends and it's not even that kind of meaningful... but thank you so much cd for appreciationđź’•