the story is nice but that is it the characters terrify me and are the stuff of night

Edit: thumbs up on the body ..... but the face is still screaming"KILL ME!!!"

It's a working "game", but that's about it. The characters look somewhat creepy and unnatural, and the game is incredibly short. Even ignoring that, the player has basically no control over what happens in the game. You can make one choice (to go home by yourself or with Sam), and the same thing happens no matter what you choose. It's barely a demo, let alone a game. Take some time to make a functional product before putting it here.

Plays out decently, but needs grammar-checking + stop having Sam repeat the main character's name so much when speaking. Doesn't seem natural.

Also, neither Sam nor Emily seem to have attractive-looking faces when they're facing you (and Emily's body proportions look awkward at close range, too. She looks fat when close, but slim when more distant.)

It's a visual novel. Nothing else really. I can see how some might like these, that's why I didn't blam it but I personally don't care for it.