If that was meant to be a parody of a story time animation, then it's not funny. And if it is meant to be an actual story time animation, that's even worse. There isn't an actual conclusion, I get it's an "experience" but there really isn't an actual sort of end to it, feels like it got cut off part way through. I'd also work a bit more on the animation aspect, rather than cutting from one pose to another with no in between. Lip syncing though seems fine though. Though again, if it's meant to be a parody, then doesn't really work as there aren't really any jokes or indication it's just one big joke.