This animation, out of all of my animations, has the weirdest ending I have ever created, I don't understand why I made it, I can't even remember making it, so don't get too confused, cuz I am too.
lets see
first off improve the graphics.....secondly make it so that the story makes some sense....dont just randomly pick things out of the air and put it in the flash.....good parts the sound and the creativity.....i liked those parts even though it made no sense at all....good job
um..............ok
well that was so-so, i did like the art style, the sound was kina bad, not so close to the mic, heheh trust me some have told me about my voice aswell, i still like it though, keep up the story...
Sound.....
Do i detect a sound from Back to the future?!? ahahah! (clock ringing)
Also when the guy is in bed.....I highly doubt ANYONE snores THAT much.....Tone that down in future releases.
Also, Try keyframing! (not so much tween next time!)
All in all I liked it....It didnt suck!!! :)
sorry
well , thats a bit too long for the crapy gfx...
if it is your first movie, try to make something with stickmans
different
not bad, but not all that interesting