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SuperCraig 2

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SuperCraig is back, and he wants to Catch Some Criminals! but where are the criminals? craig then sees a bankrobber show up.

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This is good dude, can't wait for episode 3

This is so cute, I wish it was a little bit longer though like what happen to the burgler

Well, you had voice acting, which is nice, and the art wasn't too bad. However, the whole thing was very basic. There was no background, they're just in a void, which is a really good way to break immersion, since, you know, they're not in a world. Also, Craig's faces while the robber was talking were kinda random and made it seem like he was the one talking, since the robber wasn't moving his lips. Also, it was hard to understand the robber, could you try being more articulate? Nothing really happened either.
Keep practicing, try adding backgrounds, some semblance of a world to immerse people, be more articulate with the voice acting, have more happen in an episode, okay? Submit things that feel complete.

SergenBoyGamer responds:

I undestand it, well i will try to do a background in episode 3. and ill try to be more clear.

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453
Votes
82
Score
2.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 8, 2019
1:41 AM EDT