Sure, I like drawing. I have nothing against freehanding with the mouse. Sometimes I even wonder if I could draw the same image again, following on from the last one, at a percieved later point in time. Animating cannot be THAT hard right?

Put a couple more hours into drawing all that. Don't be afraid to delete and start again.

Quick lesson on sentence/story structure: Every sentence in a paragraph should contain a little reference the the sentence before it. This reference may be a Same or similar word. The last sentence topic should also flow with the paragraph topic, even when the topic changes. So too - you want the flow of your shots to match the scenes within your animation.

I get it, this Anim is just a bit of screwing around, but my feedback is what it is. Though I have no idea what other work you have done - I hope you produce more clips and gain them IRL XP points.