Wow, Tom Fulp worked on this? I was so depressed this wasn't longer! It was too short! You had great buildup with these characters! I wanted to see more! I don't even remember how it's related to the other Arrogancy chapters.
It's so heartwarming! I was afraid it would be cynical. While it got dark, it never got rid of its positive message. I hope all goes well for this series. The little action you did have was good.