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Chana and Potol pt4.

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Took a long time as I was busy with commisions. I hope to finish this small plot by the next part hopefully.


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Animation was a bit choppy and I think the walking took a bit too long. The fact that the cat looked in the same direction and didn't move his head the entire time didn't help. I think you should have used more shots for that. Since these episodes are so short, you should try to make them as interesting as possible, you know? Otherwise, you moved along the plot, though I do wish it was longer and the backgrounds looked pretty great. Sorry for the low rating, but it had too many flaws for something of its nature. I do still really like your stuff and wanna see more.

ArindamDhar responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback. Im relatively new to animation and I'm still figuring things out. I have a long long way to go so every feedback helps. I'll keep your words in mind. :)

The backgrounds look nice, although a bit rushed. I'm not sure if that was intended or not. The smoothing on the brush strokes looks a bit off, like someone was drawing from 50% zoom with a mouse. Animation could've been done better. And it's a bit short, too.

It's okay, I guess

ArindamDhar responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback. To be honest this was rushed. I'll keep you words in mind to make my stuff better. :)

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Feb 22, 2019
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