What i really liked - thats proper sounding!
"Wounded Part 1" is the first part of a two part stop-motion short film I'm making this film as a kind of experiment to see what I can do with stop-motion. The film is based on a short story I wrote. Everything from the puppets to the environment is entirely created from scratch. I worked on this part for nearly 6 months in my free time, So I hope you will enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making this.
What i really liked - thats proper sounding!
Good job! Appreciate the effort put into the stop motioning of this.
Quite neat. I hope that once you release the next part(s), you put everything together as a final product. It was a little bit too jumpy at times, but I really like what you did.
You have a good grasp of character design and animating the character movements in stop-motion, but some things in the film felt a little jarring to look at. The initial shots where the character was walking had some jumpy camera shots and threw off the pacing a bit. Several of the background elements like the snow on the ground and trees seemed to shift to a different position between frames which also messed up the immersion a bit. Though, I did think that the blue-ish lighting was fitting for the setting and the craftsmanship of the character designs was pretty good as a whole. The musical choice and ambiance were also fitting and added to the horror of the narrative. Going forward, however, I would definitely consider being a bit more cautious while moving the characters around the stage to prevent visual hiccups like those!
Not bad, I like this one