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Parasitic Valentines Day (Animatic)

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A Love Story for Valentines Day, with music by MajorMusic.

Track used: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/846057
(Cut to fit timeframe.)

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This had a good story, and I'm glad it had a happy ending...of sorts.
A nice animatic.

Nice, simple story with the right amount of subtext (both in title and the ending). Have to admit, when first watching it, I didn't differentiate the 2 worms or understand the wafting ribbon above the male worm.

Maybe if there were a light pink trail the female worm left from the get-go (and in the later ribbon/scent trail), the rest would've made more sense. Also, maybe if there were more of a female worm establishing shot... eh, still worthy of 4/5, GG

MongooseMinion responds:

Thank you for the comment! Just letting you know- this is unfinished, so any ideas on how to improve it are extremely appreciated!

Cute animation, very unique, work on making the animation more lively by coloring. Other than that, great unique animation.

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Score
3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 13, 2019
7:18 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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