in terms of timing and composition like you said you were practicing, what you did was alright. i didn't think the backgrounds were half bad either for what this is. as for reservations, the linework and animation could definitely use some work.
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Two brothers getting some tasty Stuff.
Worked on timing and composition.
hope you guys like it. :D
Kubopix responds:
yeah line works is in my list too,
thanks for the review.