The longer it went on, the more I liked the low-budget animation of this production. A fine story in a great setting, and I particularly liked the disturbing minor-key music. Great job!

Well, this wasn't nearly as exciting as the first one. The "ads", while pretty funny, took away from any suspense there may have been. They were way too long. You tend to overdo the random things. That sorta "commercial over" montage was pretty fun and I really liked the thing where the bullet hole transformed. But then there was another commercial, which kinda ruined it. At the very start the narration was barely audible. Seriously, you don't need to crank up the music so much. The comedy wasn't that great either. I mean, I guess there was the thing at the end where Dick got mauled, that was pretty funny. The rest was just exaggerating mean-spiritedness in a predictable fashion. I mean, if they started shooting at the happy beast, that would have been funny. It was the logical way for that to go. I liked Smith taking the gun though. The baseball game was pretty interesting. But the story was also kinda all over the place, with the thing about Winston failing at everything.
Overall you put in too much filler, left the outlandish humor a bit by the wayside and lowered the exciting factor by a lot. I know your quality varies, so I hope we get another good one soon.