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music stock APM & KPM music
Sounds from soundbible

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hahaha reminds me of the old days of animation on the internet.lol

great job

You should probably animate with an animation program. Not to sound rude, but when it's still frames in MS Paint, it's kinda visually unappealing.

Speaking of visually unappealing, I REALIZE this is supposed to be creepy, but again, when it's just still frames with something like the "contacts scene", it goes the way you don't want to.

I can also see the backgrounds look inspired by Ren and Stimpy! That's a nice touch.

The sound effects could use some work too. I'd recommend looking for some SFX packs here and there because Soundbible sounds aren't really the best, but that's just my opinion.

So, the animation and sound effects could use some work.

DementiaandAgony responds:

thank you for the honest input. I've been thinking of switching to krita for a while now, but as of now we only use it for the backrounds, (which are definitly inspired by Ren & Stimpy btw :D as well as the humor and writing) but i definitly get what you mean.

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