Its OK. I found it hard to hear some of the words, but I certainly got the idea. The animation is OK, so is the art. I replayed to read the stuff at the end. Caffeine is spelt thus.
I am incompetent in any dungeon crawl mostly for the sake of not being able to avoid traps and teammates trying to kill me. IF you like this kind of thing and want to see more I have a youtube channel and go as BobTheGodly.
All criticism is good criticism I know I need to improve.
Its OK. I found it hard to hear some of the words, but I certainly got the idea. The animation is OK, so is the art. I replayed to read the stuff at the end. Caffeine is spelt thus.
Keep the audio more consistent, color the backgrounds in, Do more work with the easing of tweens and their timing. Maybe get some royalty free back ground music to quietly play in the background to fill the silence a little.