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Whoops (24 Hour Film November 2018)

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A short film I made in November of 2018 for the 24 Hour FIlms Screening.

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Notbad

So this was nice the characters are really good this was even a nice scene I love how you made it go from simple to action then even romantic you should make more maybe even a movie story type this was nice here a good film and well animated so keep up the fantastic work.

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Didn't expect that.

Well that really took an unexpectedly dark turn pretty quick. :O Such a bright and vibrant style to convey such tragedies... and one thing after the other, lmao. XD The blood splatter seemed a darker tone than the finale. Good fun after all.

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This kind of $h!t is why I'm single.

Hahaha, this went in an unexpected direction. The animation wasn't that bad for something made in 24 hours. I certainly like how misleading the beginning was, I legitimately had no idea this was gonna happen. Seems like it could happen in real life too, if rarely. The voice acting was okay, especially considering those limitations. Even if it sounded kinda cliched, that added to the misleading factor. My only complaint is that some shots changed too fast and the character exchange at the very start was spoken way too fast. It started to feel kinda confusing. That shot of the guy's arm in the hospital also looked like it wasn't supposed to end there.
Still though, I gotta say, this did what it wanted to, and it did it well.

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Score
3.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 13, 2019
1:01 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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