What just happened?
__The Good__
The graphics were pretty good, I liked the backgrounds. Whatever style this was, it surely was different.
__The Bad__
The voice acting was terrible! I couldn't understand one word of it. The old lady was esier to listen to but was still hard to understand.The voices were also stupid and annoying. I couldn't even tell if there was a plot or just two people rambling abou something. It was way too short! You couldn't do a lot with this because it was so short! Also there was barely any violence. When the old lady was shot you could have at least added some blood!
__Improvement__
This flash needs a lot of improvement! Use better voices next time. The ones you are useing are just plain stupid. More violence next time and of course make it a lot longer!
__Over All__
Over all this flash isn't good. It's short and hard to understand. Try harder next time! Good luck on your future flashes!