Good story. Any chance that this gets animated?
First chapter of my art project "Charlotte and" a pilot of sorts.
MZShaidu:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/MEGASHAIDU?lang=en
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/mzshaidu/failure
Hero:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/HeroWasTaken
Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/HeroWasTaken
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5SdW4K5kIRnZTeYifZHSaA
Background music is the song "Failure" by MZShaidu but slowed down and trimmed in some places, huge thanks to MZShaidu for letting me use his music (and butcher it like the nooblord I am).
Good story. Any chance that this gets animated?
Interesting premise.. however it would had been better if some parts were fully animated, like a storyboard.
I really like how you colored your illustrations,it looks super good. Also nice universe you invented there,simple and efficient,just like the music.
If I could tell you to improve on something in the writting it would be not too repeat " The man dressed like a fisherman" every time you enunciate him. Instead,give him different substitutes like : "The old man","the elder",or just "the man",and many others. But at the same time it gives the story a certain children book feel. I don't know if that's what you were going for,but hey,you do as you want.
Anyway,keep it up and good continuation. :)
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