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Unfit S. E.1 (Pilot)

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5 young adults dealing with a 3 story, mutant inhabited, ex military complex, turned fitness center. Tyler the new hire must learn to be apart of the team while not being killed by the mutants on the third floor.

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This was interesting, the premise is very new and captivating but I feel the writing was hit and miss at points. The characters are a bit hard to relate to in a lot of instances, I'm not sure what Tyler as a character brings to the table besides being the new guy. I feel vulgarity is thrown into the open there rather than being used to be the meat of some of the jokes, so it feels out of place a little.

The voice acting is alright, despite each actor having different microphone quality. I can look over that however because I could tell they were doing a good job playing the characters. The dialogue writing is okay as well.

I feel the art serves as a place holder at the moment; a lot of the jokes and even dialogue suffer because of it. There is very little facial expressions, besides eyebrow movement, and that really hurts the animation because it's hard to tell what the characters are really thinking or feeling. That guy that keeps grunting at people for instance is a character that has potential but hardly works without exaggerated visual gags to accompany him.

Overall it's a very interesting pilot (I rarely watch very long animations to the end here) and I find that with some adjustments here and there this could be really good.

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Views
551
Votes
67
Score
2.82 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 19, 2018
5:20 PM EST