don't get it. thats it.
and happens at once
don't get it. thats it.
Pretty impressive, but far too long. There's a fine line between dreamily surreal and self-indulgently repetitive, and at times you
Quick fix suggestion:
Cut the sequence between 0:14 and 0:34.
Cut the sequence between 0:50 and 0:58.
Cut the sequence between 1:10 and 1:20
Cut the sequence between 2:55 and 2:59.
Slow down the voice in the last 11 seconds, fuzz out your name.
Additionally you might wanna have the gradient & lightening vary more in reaction to/in the rhythm of the longer sentences for a more immersive experience.
Followed. Very curious where you go from this.
Thanks for the feedback! I agree it's too long. I blindly do these pretty quickly as a way to create techniques to incorporate into a short film I'll be working on this spring. I originally composed the song as an exercise in creating non-linear montage. It got long. Please check out my other experiments on YouTube. Link in my profile.
hypnotic .sort of cool