This is an animatic I made in my computer art class at UAF. It's about an autistic woman named Jessie who gets her pencil stolen by an elf.
Midnight in the Graveyard by Twin Musicom is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Source: http://www.twinmusicom.org/song/252/midnight-in-the-graveyard
Artist: http://www.twinmusicom.org
Wacky and fun
So this was pretty wacky and pretty fun if you ask me, I like the style of it some really good humor in this one, I do think it could have gone on longer with wacky scenes and even some added subtitles, overall I found this to be really good stuff so nice efforts on this film.
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I do think it could have gone on longer with wacky scenes and even some added subtitles
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Well, thanks for the feedback. I'm not entirely sure what you mean when you mentioned subtitles, but thanks anyway. I'm actually working on a longer cartoon for the future, so I hope you can look forward to that.
Really quaint and cool, love the black and white pencil style. The only thing I'd keep an eye out is the audio, it sounded a bit sloppy like it needed compression or equalization, watch out for those muddy low frequencies on the voices!
Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep an eye on the audio in the future.
I enjoy animatics.
The story is expressive and easy to follow.
Though a bit cheesy.
I'm not a fan of the character designs, they look unrealistic.
For an animatic this is pretty polished work! A lot of animated bits within the animation too, just lacking the final touches, and color, and things like that... I have no idea how the cow thing happened though. XD Using the wrong device there...? Good fun.
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