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The Hunt

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A man on the run from the world find himself surrounded by several eager fighters.

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you know i gotta be honest, i wanted to give this a five because the first few seconds are great, the art looks good and the ambient background sounds really set the tone, i could feel the tension in this scene.

and right after that it falls apart because this isnt finished. you've got the makings of something with serious quality here, but it really should be finished. I think you owe it to yourself to do just that, and present a completed product.

other than that what is here is great and i look forward to seeing more in the future

jng-artimation responds:

You people are definitely better than Tumblr anons.

Yea, I had some hiccups trying to find SFX and come up with foliage with a lot of the sounds while also trying not to use copyrighted material such as background music. It is one of my earlier attempts after getting the hang of doing animatics but I'll keep a lot of these points in mind when I make future videos.

This is very nice for a work in progress.

The first 25 seconds were pretty good with setting the atmosphere, but then once the action picked up I felt like it was severely lacking in sound effects, combined with things just floating across the screen it felt very confusing to me.

This has a lot of potential though, needs some more inbetweens and more sounds for stuff happening and it ought to be a very solid fight animatic.

jng-artimation responds:

Yea, I had some hiccups trying to find SFX and come up with foliage with a lot of the sounds while also trying not to use copyrighted material such as background music. It is one of my earlier attempts after getting the hang of doing animatics but I'll keep a lot of these points in mind when I make future videos.

This has potential. Keep working on this.

jng-artimation responds:

Thank you as well.

Really great animatic! I would love to see more!

jng-artimation responds:

I'll try my best to keep up with future ideas and stories.

Credits & Info

Views
839
Votes
83
Score
2.85 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 9, 2018
3:03 PM EST
Genre
Action