you know i gotta be honest, i wanted to give this a five because the first few seconds are great, the art looks good and the ambient background sounds really set the tone, i could feel the tension in this scene.
and right after that it falls apart because this isnt finished. you've got the makings of something with serious quality here, but it really should be finished. I think you owe it to yourself to do just that, and present a completed product.
other than that what is here is great and i look forward to seeing more in the future