I actually really like surreal stuff, and i think the direction was sorta fine. A few things that would have REALLY helped. Other than the art, which I hope/assume that's something you're just gonna get better at or maybe you don't have the resources to digitally produce it well, the sound was a big issue. The stock music fit well, but you could have done without a lot of the sound effects, like the 'Awwww' because it took me out of it. Look into audio mixing as well. Put the sound effects/music into something like audacity and mess with the levels so that it's not too shrill and so that it sounds nice.