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My unfinished stuff

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These are all my unfinished animations (without audio)
Any feedback is welcome!
Im trying to get better with animation everday, so thanks for seeing this!

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could have seriously done without the long pause of empty frames, it almost made me click off

other than that what came after the pause was pretty promising, your art is good but your animation is a little inconsistent. some loops are simply not looping, making it very obvious at which point you started animating as the last frame quickly jumps to it

must say there are some very pleasing moments of animation and i understand this is a random assortment of work so im looking forward to what you got to show next

Cristalflake responds:

Thank you so much for the advise! Actually, I didn't noticed the BIG empty space, it was supposed to have an animatic there... its weird because I uploaded the same file but with audio on youtube (I just took the audio off here because two musics were copyrighted and I suppose I can't put it here that way...) and there the empty space have video and audio that works :t
Anyway, thank you for seeing it, and taking your time to critique! I appreciate your help!

Pretty cool stuff man, my favorites were around 0:46; solid anatomy and perspective/turn around studies. The old tests were pretty nice as well, you seem to have frame by frame down for the most part.

As we are speaking animation though, I'm not sure how you connect different things into your work to give it life, so I suggest making a short if you want actual critique.

If I were to look at this as a movie it is kinda lacking since there's a lot of silence and empty space. Could certainly cut down on some of that silence and add some audio; it's not because this is a experimental reel that you can't make it efficient or even interesting on its own.

Cristalflake responds:

Thank you so much!! Actually, its silent because the first animatic was with some copyright music, so i took it off, but didn't added nothing else (im kinda dumb too)
Also, thanks for the tip! I'll try to make some shorts too to add here!

Credits & Info

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399
Votes
80
Score
2.12 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 4, 2018
4:36 AM EST
Genre
Experimental