Looking forward to what you are gonna post on newgrounds. Always a good idea to post your work on different sites. You never know which websites/partners will flake out on you.

The animation quality was good, but that unfunny rant was about some irrelevant topic I forgot the second I stopped the video. Like why would you assume random strangers on internet would take interest in some random irrelevant minor quirks about your personality, since you are a faceless stranger o them too. I somehow feel you should spend a bit more time communicating with people face to face in real life to understand how insignificant and fake are the virtual world and your emotions attached to it.

I like the art. The cute stuff has been done before, but you had a different style for that shot of yourself at the computor. Either way, i liked it. Your narration was pretty nice too and i liked the sub joke and your kinda awkward storytelling style. Random derpy visuals were nice as well. Anyways, welcome to Newgrounds! Maybe you oculd make a vid like his for us (or not)
Overall a nice and fun introduction, but i can only give it a 3.5 because, well, it's an introduction, not really a story or anything