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This took me two weeks to make and Im glad that this came out well! It would make me happy if you guys also go to my youtube channel-Crazyapple236 it would mean alot to me if you check it out! Crazyapple236 out!

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There are things which need improvement, but in particular the development of the flow of the story-line is something in which you seem to have put a lot of work. It was interesting to see how the antagonist dealt with each character but there are things which need to be worked on. The most important is the audio, it seems like a better sync between the voices/sound effects and music is needed, but also there was a problem where some voices seem to have had a different volume, it is important that you synchronize them in such a way that they are adjusted to each other. You could also try to look into using more esthetical backgrounds, perhaps you can ask artists on Newgrounds for help with this, it would give a different feeling to the continued episodes I think and could possibly give it a much more interesting appearance to your audience. The animation is ok, but I would suggest to reduce your tweening and try to put more time in the animation frame-by-frame, this is a difficult and time-consuming process, but regarding the good flow of the story-line you have it would really improve your animation in my opinion. The music fitted well, but for the voices and voice actors I think it is important that there is an improvement here, the voice acting could have been done better.

You are talented in the flow of the story-line and adjusting that exactly to the time lapse, but work is needed on the audio and some of the graphics.

Crazyapple236 responds:

Thanks for the feed back!

Sure took a turn from the comedy after that initial trick or treat bit... but you capture both moods pretty well, both before and after the switch. Nice work with the audio especially. Really building up a brooding atmosphere. And with characters like that you'd think they had a bit more fighting spirit! Not bad though. I like that you take your time with the scenes, not rushing the surprises, just a long, slow build-up... like those good old days of scary movies once again. :) Nice work.

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Not bad, nice flow, a little long. But the characters should have fought back a bit better. Thought it was a bit wierd for a comedy parody, dark humor and all that.

Crazyapple236 responds:

Yea tbh I should of picked "other" XD But I was like eeeeeh idk what to pick oof!

Nice, although i'm not really an amazing animator myself (so don't take my words too seriously).
Backgrounds and character movements is good, but some parts are too slow.

Crazyapple236 responds:

Thanks for the feed back! I'm still improving so yea XD

Can really see this as a 90's cartoon special just that the audio needs a bit of improvement, still very good though Keep it up;)

Crazyapple236 responds:

Thanks for the feedback on the audio! I will definitely improve it and Im always willing to
improve and tyty <3

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