No.

Be on here or not.

Not bad at all

I would not call these animations as, they are more of Narrated story pages. If you are going to call these animations, at minimum move the lips when speaking. The narration is clear and understandable, like others (Alex Clark or Brewster or the great NWAR) but as you admit miss out on puns. If this is an ad for your channel then you definitely need something to make us wanting more.