I can see a nugget of potential inside this very rough exterior. Can't wait to see where you go from here. My biggest issue is that it seems like it's not done and this is a layout for something bigger. The very rough presentation made it slightly hard to follow what was happening if you don't
know the source material. So sadly I cant rate it on what I HOPE its gonna be, just but what's in front of me. It's only growth from here! Keep it up!!