The ending wasn't very satisfying, but otherwise a fun watch! The animation is nice and I like the voice acting. Dough Boy's cute responses were...well...cute. I really liked dad and his talk of obedience and his insistence on Dough Boy staying away from the basement. The fact that he's wearing pink slippers just makes it infinitely better. I feel like you didn't need to have both the scream and him getting ready for the run before he starts running down the stairs. It takes away from the momentum.
Overall, it was fun, but way too short. I hope we get to see part 2 soon.