Keep going. More of this.

I'm confused i guess this is the first thing like this you've done in that case i can give you 3 1/2 stars wish you would say what you where trying to show or where you're wanting to end up with this kind of interesting but i did'nt really feel a theme which could have got you another half a star or even a whole one

Really feel this man, if it were part of a music video or story - you would have something really magical. Show the world what you've got.