Skyrim stories. ep 2

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Animations pretty good, comedic timing is on point. Sound effects/ambience is perfect. Keep up the good work. I'd try and speed it up a little if you can, but if not, it works.

This is good, well animated with some good humor.

The joke was fun and kind of creative, I think it could have invested in some ironies of the game a bit more, but it is ok like this.

One thing I think you should improve on (and it happened on the last one), is the voice acting/voice over, or the lack thereof. On parts in which characters from the game appear you could use their own voices and dialogue, and for the character that represents the PC you could try to do some voice acting, maybe call someone who knows how to do it.

It just feels pretty weird when the characters say the beginning of a word and don't finish it, some other parts they say the whole thing, others they don't say anything. I don't know where you got that voice audio, but it isn't working.

Dantu responds:

Thank you!
Agree with you. I'm not english speaking and voiceover is a big problem for me. So I think, further I will try to make movies without it. Only with sounds.

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3.40 / 5.00

Sep 14, 2018
10:29 AM EDT
Comedy - Parody