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Short Horror Game

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I made this game in 1 day because my other game WW1 Shooter bloated in size and was for the most part unsucessful thus I made this to hopefully redeem my name enjoy.Ps if game has white screen go to another tab for a while and wait there for the game to load.Use arrow keys to move

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i guess that the pixel art is okay? i think it was made in scratch so you cant expect much.

For a day, I do think you could've done more, or at least worked on it a little bit longer. It was short simple and weird? I honestly didn't enjoy the game that much and I only enjoyed the end where you kept pressing space and a gun goes off because it was something.

Honestly, just saying hit space to end the game at the end was weird move to play. You could've given it a small text of what happened or a message. I didn't mind just walking right. Because there is some games that do that, but they always hold a compelling story that makes the player want to keep going right.

You didn't necessarily needed to add text to the game while you're getting to the end of the game. But you did call the game a 'Short Horror Game' and it should be a little bit more spoopy. You know? Yeah, the character that the player plays as is rather weird looking but nothing extremely haunting about the game. Nothing psychological. Nothing. Yeah, it had some weird stuff on the wall, but it didn't freak me out at all.

Another bug on this, the game end by itself. You don't even have to walk to the end of the screen and the game just goes black and the text is "Press space to end the game". Just take this in mind when you make a third game and try to redeem yourself for a third time by at least taking a little longer to make it so you can really show everyone, "hey I can make a good game."

FoolProofGaming responds:

Thank you for your review I promise to you that I will go back and fix everything that you mentioned in your review plus i'm gonna add more so that I can tell everyone that I can make a good game!!! thank you for your time yours truly Max

i guess its a work in progress?

FoolProofGaming responds:

Well i'll try to add more do you got any feedback?

Seriously? The only thing you can do is walk to the right and then the game is over?

FoolProofGaming responds:

Could you tell me then what I could do to make it better?

Credits & Info

1.74 / 5.00

Aug 31, 2018
11:58 PM EDT