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Snowflake and Rainbow

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Adventures of snowflake and rainbow

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The randomness is good but its hard to tell what kind of creatures are these a little info about the back story would be nice and smoother animations I think you can do really good in the future with your art if you practiced more on it@! also what @Thegamingtrickster said would help alot too

There's pretty much no real animation and it's not that surreal, at least not in the way I'd hoped. The transitions are very sudden so it can get kinda disorienting. There's no rhyme or reason to anything, and it doesn't have many qualities to make up for that. I like the way it escalated and the jokes could have been pretty good. The alien cut to speech too suddenly so it was confusing though. Also, it seemed to be facing the wrong way when talking to them, which made me think it might have been a whole new scene. The cheese in the end should also be a bit more yellow.
There was some cool weirdness in this, but it sorta felt meaningless. You should take more care with the transitions and maybe add something cool to the art and you could have something good.

colmendean123 responds:

Thanks a lot man I'm really just trying to get footing with this idea. I wanna make something without a beginning a middle or an end. I really appreciate it.

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Aug 30, 2018
4:10 PM EDT