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Dancing Person

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My first animation, please critique

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goes well with gangplank galleon if you speed it up lmao

I'd probably do some slow-ins and slow-outs. The movement feels a little robotic. Putting emphasis(holding) on certain poses a little longer and easing into those poses will make the dance feel more realistic

Some of the in-betweens didn't line up as well as they should, it seemed that you might've miscalculated where the extremes would taper off.

Good first try! you're character is precious

It's nice, but you should work on the inbetween frames to make it smoother, anyways, it's actually pretty good to be your first animation! Great job!

Work on your inbetweens.

Fitzhugh96 responds:

would you recommend tweening?

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Faves:
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Votes
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Score
2.37 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 29, 2018
5:09 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental