you made it 4/3 you were a little off with the animation to voice, and the licence will hurt you for making this replica....
in fact you probably shouldn't copy other animator's style of timing.
try to develop a sense of self timing. self evident credibility for the source material in writing and telling, and make sure it feels right to the audience.
just remaking the scene isn't fun for us because we know what is going on and we know the outcome. its not fun for you because you have to tirelessly get every line and frame to work with the audio match cut.
you simply have no fun here.
i want you as an animator to HAVE FUN with your own work time and not feel the shackles of the lines drawn before you.