Very cute

Wow I couldnt stop chuckling with this entry you have something really good here it has some very good "POTENTIAL" I could see you making a series of these two guys in different moments and situations the voices are great I would also ad subtitles just for extra measure, I would suggest to Tweak a few things here but I will get to more of that later, You have Utilised and Morphed a simple concept into something of good interest.

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I could see you making a series of these two guys in different moments and situations the voices are great I would also ad subtitles just for extra measure

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I really like how original this feels in a sea of parodies. I also like the little touches, like the sense of movement brought on by those lines in the windows.

I like the characters with how silly they are. Like the guy who just grumbles at his newspaper and the guy listening to his tunes. There's just something wholesome about them and their weirdness. I can imagine a bunch of photos from their travels around the world already. I especially like tune guy. He seems wise. The voices are pretty good, though they're a bit too quiet. Also, newspaper guy seems a bit evil at the end there, not sure if it was intentional. The end dance is beautiful beyond words. Keep it up, I like your style!