Nice visuals here

Wow this was really intense and I really love the shadded and black and white style you have here, there was a few "SCENES" and I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles, But you do have a very unique and different entry here so nice work hope to see more just like this, So breathing some new life into an old style of film seems to always work for the best just like you have done here, and its all working out for the best, so lets keep that aspect up.

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I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles

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That is some very good motions I watched it over an over again I've been trying to get fight scenes like this for awhile. Love this a lot you got skills

nice art! loved the greys in here, but the sound effects are repetitive.

Now this was pretty awesome! :) Just the fight in itself would've been impressive, but the smoke does work well as well, only in that one final scene with no motion does it seem more like a layer than a real part of the product. Awesome work! I like the subtle sound effects too. Makes you feel like you're watching through a mist. Ninja kind of stuff.

-cd-