The idea and overall tone is very good but I believe it would have worked better with a little more work such as bit more animation instead of just the still image. Other then that it's pretty good but requires a bit of extra work.
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The idea and overall tone is very good but I believe it would have worked better with a little more work such as bit more animation instead of just the still image. Other then that it's pretty good but requires a bit of extra work.