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Ey! I encourage you all to watch my previous jam submission, "I Have This Dream..." before watching this! Keep that in mind, I guess.


This mess right here is what happens when you fuck up the pre-production, I hope you enjoy it, I feel it's a fun lil clusterfuck. Cheers!

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Entertaining

So here was some entertaining toon you have here, I like the "OLD-STYLE" of animation here along with the music to make it more nostalgic and such, it was very entertaining, and the art was good, So when I review these I tend to look for people taking short cuts or putting thru some effort, you for sure have not took the easy way out on this one, I can see the direction with decent quality here on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Dont think you really need any changes on this but making more of these would be good.

~X~

Pretty cool how not only do you show the revolutionary hover chair but actually how it might work, with magnets lining the wall... though guess it's not all new considering magnetic trains. Looks like fun though. Surrounding that one invention: a lot of wonkiness! XD Don't know what impression to get here. How does it end. Where does it go. What was this really all about?! I feel like it started with the intention of comedy but soon moved more into the FDS lane: strange, psychadelic, without a clear and highlighted path. Is was fun to watch though! And props on good soundwork to go with it.

-cd-

Kolumbo responds:

It's all a mess, Cyberdevil, don't even try to make sense out of it. I know I couldn't.

There was some pretty cool animation and some nice imagery, like the guy's arms stretching like that in the time machine. The sound effects were pretty cool, and Mabelma's backgrounds are pretty cool and weird. I like the ending with the egg. So, does that mean that the egg dream is....THE FUTURE!?! *dun dun duuuun*
I just felt the comedy was a bit too exaggerated, so it got a bit stale, and it didn't have that much to do with the theme, though I did like the character and I appreciate how wrong it all went.

Kolumbo responds:

Thanks a lot! Appreciate the review, and definitely agree about the comedy. Thanks for the feedback!

... What if the future is just a dream

I love it!!!

Kolumbo responds:

It loves you back!

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