Awesome, i like it!
Dorito And Pringle's Tv Goes Out
Awesome, i like it!
The joke itself is funny, but the execution isn't great, mainly in the line delivery and artwork itself.
The art and animation are very simple, but that doesn't always limit comedy. I do like the joke, especially the ending. The voice acting isn't very good, and the pacing needs work. Like, the guy answered the question at the start so fast it was disorienting, and the shot switching felt abrupt as well considering the dialogue pacing. Work on that, and keep making things. It seems like you can do some nice jokes.
thanks, i'll work on that!
Thanks For the advice