animation is decent. the story, though not great, isn't exactly bad either. just kinda stuck somewhere in the middle, funny enough to get by. although the ending is fairly abrupt.
now, you gotta find someone more than yourself (or whoever it was) to do the voice acting. there was one, maybe two characters that it was bearable for. otherwise, it just ruins the entire experience, particularly the old guy act. sorry, but the guy's no Mel Blanc. that's not to mention that despite the context and format of the story, you should really think about your dialogue carefully before you record it.
on the bright side, i would say it's an improvement over your first animation. i don't know how you got Macho Man's legs re-attached, but i expect he'll make a full recovery before your next video. good luck.