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Something I've been thinking about for a few weeks. Doesn't have any audio, and I'm planning on redoing it. Enjoy my first animation!

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Honestly, very bad.
It had a good concept but the execution was poor.
1. The artwork was terrible, looking rough on everything.
2. You cannot make a full animation in under an hour, that's crazy talk.
3. No audio, why?
4. It feels like a slideshow rather than an animation, that isn't good...
5. Bland backgrounds are poor and uninspired, to the point of being unnoticeable.
Here are some things you can work on to make your next animation better. Since this is your first, I will not bash you in. Good luck...

GrandMasterOfLife responds:

Thank you for your response! I appreciate the honest feedback and will try to do better next time. This was the first animation, and was really more of a test to see if the programs that I was using would work. I didn't have any sounds readily available, but I will in the future. Thanks again for the review and I hope to hear from you on future videos!

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2.40 / 5.00

Jul 28, 2018
3:29 PM EDT