Original? I think @Doomroar may be fair with their suspicion. I'd understand if you intentionally make incorrect subtitles (there's that famous butterfly meme) but the dialogues don't even make sense and why'd you bother using voice overs if they don't support the actual content?
Phone call to Sakura junior high?
Respecting some person's father???
I can't be consistently mishearing five times through. This script is as broken as it can be and the only good thing is that there's at least effort in delivering a quick joke. As for the character designs and style, they could appeal to quite large crowds which I admit is a fine choice, kudos to you.
So 2/5 congrats on making pictures move though I'm disappointed in current comedy and if it was indeed ripped off... even more so.