Great job there.
Asimo's Afterlife (1930s Robot Jam)
(A little note about the audio, for me it was low so I would turn up your volume)
Asimo finds himself in a world of trouble after being woken up
after his retirement.
Based off of Honda's Asimo and ESPECIALLY his recent retirement.
Seriously, thank you to everyone who helped out! It was fun, and I have personally enjoyed getting back into animation! Time to start a new project!
The art was pretty simple at times and there wasn't much animation. The music was nice, but outside of that and the dancing tombstones, it didn't feel very 1930's. It was hard to tell what was really going on, the story felt vague and not well explained. Also, the music weirdly cut out at the end. I found the backgrounds and the art for when Asimo is lying in his grave pretty cool, and I do understand that you were probably on a tight schedule making this.
TheDyingSun responds:
I couldn't agree with you more! Story is something that I definitely need to work on. Good concepts, but horrible communication of them. Thank you so much for the review and I will take everything into account for the future, and I think there could have been a better way for me to balance everything.
