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1930s style animation for 1930RobotJam

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very short

So that one was very short film, The art is nice and I can see you adding more to this, because in the end this was just very short, so my advice is you can stretch it out a tad bit more and ad more frames more animations maybe even bring in some characters or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for sure make this longer.

~X~

ToddCircle responds:

Thanks for the comment.
Yes, I agree. It should be longer.

The animation is pretty good, but it's not very interesting story wise. I really like the intro screen and the music screen, they look very fitting and I just like that you put Newgrounds in a 1930's title-card. The actual cartoon itself was not very 1930's looking and there wasn't really much point to it, but maybe I'm missing something. I like that you chose the classical music (Blue Danube Waltz, right?), it feels like something that would be used in a 1930's cartoon, and the title music was fitting as well. I understand that you did this quickly, so I'm aware why the cartoon is the way it is.

You just might be first one out with an entry for this one! :D Fast work, and nice style, though not particularly long or punchy... the pun here being... the one robot's filming the other robot? That bit has me a bit confused but otherwise: not bad!

-cd-

ToddCircle responds:

Thanks :-)
Looks like mine was the 2nd entry, first entry came in about 2.3 hours earlier.
Spent my time trying to get some sort of 1930s style happening. Having no idea what to make I just submitted what I had and see what happens...