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A Cosmic Tale of Creation starring Ricky the Rat

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Ricky the Rat is on a mission to explore planets. The drawing was okay, but the animation could of been smoother. There should of been some cheese. Maybe an entire planet made out of cheddar or mozzarella? That would of made all the exploring worth it.

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This was actually a good little story the characters work well I do think you could refine the characters just a tid bit, more smoother lines and more shades in the backround would be a plus, anyways nice little story you have here, hope to see more of your work sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could refine the characters just a tid bit, more smoother lines and more shades in the backround would be a plus

~X~

A pretty trippy trip! The pink really cuts against the blue in the beginning but... after that all is great. Can't say the animation's the most fluent, and character movement seems as simple as possible, but it's still all part of the style somehow. Creative turn from planet to planet and then... big bang in the cosmos? Interesting...

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Uploaded
Jun 28, 2018
10:37 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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  • Daily 4th Place June 30, 2018