I love the story! It's very well executed.

This is legit suspenseful and the animation didn't bother me at all. Not that it should be a bother.

Nice dream scenes

You have Earned the Golden review award from me, since you outdid yourself here and you have Morphed something here from basic to exciting and fantastic, So lets get this one really started. So this was cool I like this and the style, pleasent and dark, some good animation you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The darke scenes could be a bit more darker.

~X~

Falling from heights has always been a big fear for me.
There were some things that need to be retouched.
Like the walk cycle when the kid was heading to the door.
But all in all good job!

Love the special effects on this. Especially the ending scene, keep on animating! Hope to see more story developement in the future.