Mara has an essay due soon and has to do all-nighters if she hopes to get it done on time.
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This is what I was able to get done in a week after my computer crashed and corrupted my file. I wanted to make it longer and add more polish to it, but time crunch, ya know?
Thanks for Watching!
Victory
Victory thats what I would call the start of this one, So here we have a nice effort and a nice flash with something different, and I like the style here and how this all plays out, So lets get something started here. you have certainly Utilised all elements in this flash movie. Very good dream on this one.
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I wouldnt mind some more depth of shades and detail in the skin tones and clothing just adds a nice little detail.
~X~
Awesome job with this, SB!! I still can’t believe you managed to recover this project like you did and STILL have the animation turn out great. Cheers ❤️
When she stumbled through that doorway I thought she'd tripped, rather than fallen into an abyss, at first, but apart from that little thing the rest of this flows flawlessly, in an easy to follow but nightmarish kind of way. The mirror bit was pretty cool. Always nice seeing some scare like that before the main character actually becomes aware of it! Nice work.
-cd-
A short yet beautiful piece of animation. Nicely done.
~M~
LOVED the art style, and the character, only needs a voice actress! I hope you do more stuff like this!
