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Dennis and Melanie Talk About Free Will

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Hey guys, here's an animatic for a short film. Some of it's animated.

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I voted 4 before I finished it because the animation was only partially done, but It was actually a 5 after I saw the end. :( Just letting you know to subtract a 4 and add a 5.

The conversation topic was better than the animation.

Such different styles between the fully animated, the partially animated, the non-colored, the sketched, the in-animate bits... it's almost like a collab. Started a bit normally, but once the philosophical approach kicks in, woah, time to focus! The free will convo drifts in and away between other bits, slices of life, but it was a nice talk. Looking forward to seeing the finished thing, whenever time comes?

-cd-

Ok... looking at your previous stuff, I don't know why I was following you. But if I hadn't, I wouldn't have seen this so I'm glad I was.
It's so cool too, because I'm actually writting a text on that subject and it helps a bit, reminding me to include the quantum theory part.

So thanks. And I hope I get to see the finished thing 'cause it really looks good. the shapes and poses are really strong, and the secondary animations are nice (for the animated parts). The timing seems slow in those though but I guess it's because it's in between blocking and polish.

Anyhow. I love it

It's fine. It's not a bad concept, it has a sort of nice vibe. It's also different, original, and seems like it would have that kind of comfy/slice of life vibe. There isn't much more to say about this just from the animatics. I do think, however, that you make a much stronger case for the lack of free will than against it, it's like the girl could've said quite a lot more. But it's still fine I guess.

I'd like to see this animated some day.

PecanOutcast responds:

Appreciate the feedback!

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Jun 14, 2018
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  • Daily 5th Place June 16, 2018