PAPERTHIN Rebels Chapter 10

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Being struggling with my artstyle and directing this episode. I have put off animating this episode for months but I finally rushed it to get over it.

This will be the last poorly animated main stories of my Channel and account.

I'm working on a music video next in collaboration with YungTeaCan here on Newgrounds... First time I'm working with someone else.

Thanks for your support and feed back.

God bless.

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Yes, the animated parts are great, but the audio needs help. Here, this will help: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285

AguRex responds:

Thanks a lot.

It's not working

I really liked this, the animation for the most part was pretty good and the particle effects for explosions and gunshots looked really great!! I especially liked the skeleton/regeneration part, that looked amazing.

If I were to point out anything it would be the audio, I think some of the sound effects were sometimes too loud or too quiet, and the ending song was a lot louder than the rest of the vid, not a bad thing, it just is a bit weird.

Keep up the great work!

AguRex responds:

Thanks a lot for your feedback. It will really help me to improve. Thanks a lot.

I couldn't understand what the voice said, but the rest was great. Also, the music at the end was much louder than the main animation. I'm looking forward to more, though.

AguRex responds:

Oh... I'll try to be clearer. I'll end less effects to the audio so it can be clear.

Thanks for feedback I'll make the changes next time.

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3.26 / 5.00

Jun 11, 2018
7:30 PM EDT